Audience Research - Focus Groups

We took suggestions and improvements from different people who would fit our target audience (teenagers and young adults). After they watched the draft of the opening sequence and this is this the feedback we got back:

• The concept of the opening wasn't clear enough, make it evident that she's being stalker 
• However the opening was interesting as it makes you wonder why you're watching her
• Perhaps consider different angles and movements when refilming, zooming in and out on the character to add more effect
• In the last clip, her head got cut - make sure all characters and scenery is in frame when filming
• Add a few more shots with the guy (stalker) in it e.g. when the girl is walking up the stairs to include him so he's always there
• Too many cuts when the girl is moving
• The cuts were too quick and make the shots go together
• Different music - more sinister
• Make the stalker character fit the genre conventions more
• Varied angles of shots created it to look good
• Certain shots were effective and engaged the audience
• Shots were too similar