Audience Research - Focus Groups 2

We had another focus group for the redraft of our pre-production task. However compared to the first focus group instead of asking our target audience, we asked a group of media studies students from a year 12 class. By doing this, it enabled us to get specific detail into what we could do to improve while also having the audience fit the certain ages for the film. From the first focus group, it gave us more of an idea of what the audience wanted to see where as in the second one we were able to identify what we had done well and what wasn't to then make improvements on. 
Here is the feedback we got back to now improve on:

• Add some found footage at the start of a city scene- moving in on a car park (aerial shot)
• Re-shoot the car park ceiling (needs more light)
• Have some parallel scenes of what the boy was doing - use the pulse transition with jump cuts x2
• POV shots
• Over the shoulder shots (try a whip pan)
• More close ups